Following the Captain
By
R. Earle Harris All rights reserved (c) 2015 (r dot earle dot harris at gmx dot com)
FADE IN:
EXT. WOODED FIELDS - DAY
Farm country in rural Georgia. We hear the voice of JOSHUA Durham, an eighty-four-year-old
lawman, filled with strength of character.
JOSHUA (V.O.)
My father survived the War. Captain
saw him through all that. But Sherman
put him in the ground. All Sherman
left us in Georgia was bare dirt and
a plundered farm. Trying for years
to bring our good farm back killed
my father. Because there were still
too many of us left with mother, I
had to leave. So I went to find Captain.
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EXT. FARM - DAY
Durham family farm in Georgia.
EXT. FARM - DAY
Dooryard of Durham farm. JOSHUA is a big, strapping seventeen. He has a passable
farm horse saddled with a worn-out farm saddle lacking skirts. His MOTHER, OLDER
BROTHER and YOUNGER BROTHER are here.
JOSHUA
MOTHER
YOUNGER BROTHER
Are you really going to find Captain?
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JOSHUA
I am. I know he's in Texas.
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MOTHER
I know you'll find him, son.
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OLDER BROTHER
Joshua turns to his older brother.
OLDER BROTHER (CONT'D)
Father gave this to me. But I think
he'd want you to have it where you're
going. You take it.
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He hands Joshua a good old cavalry pistol, well cared-for.
JOSHUA
Thank you, Eli. I'd best go.
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Mounts and leaves, accompanied by their farewells.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Joshua rides away from his family.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Rural road through Georgia. Joshua is riding west.
JOSHUA (V.O.)
All this happened a long time ago.
And some parts of it, the killing
parts, are hard for folks to understand
now. They don't believe we did it
like that. Back then we trusted in
the Good Book. And that means we took
it to heart when it said that the
day and hour of a man's death were
written on the day he was born. Captain
and the Good Book got us through many
a hard place. That and praying. Maybe
you don't believe we prayed. Well,
the hell with you.
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Then suddenly -
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Sunrise on the Texas coastal plain, near Burton.
Title Over:
Texas, 1875.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Joshua nears the fair-sized little town of Burton.
EXT. BURTON - DAY
Joshua rides into Burton and up to the post office. He dismounts and goes in.
INT. POST OFFICE - DAY
POSTMASTER and Joshua.
JOSHUA
POSTMASTER
JOSHUA
I'm looking for Captain McNelly, Captain
Lee McNelly.
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POSTMASTER
JOSHUA
My father rode with him in the war.
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POSTMASTER
Joshua is silent under the postmaster's gaze.
JOSHUA
I guess I just wanted to shake his
hand.
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POSTMASTER
JOSHUA
POSTMASTER
Long way to come just to shake a man's
hand.
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Joshua does not respond.
POSTMASTER (CONT'D)
McNelly has a soldier's headright,
planted in cotton, just north of town.
But he's gone to Austin.
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JOSHUA
POSTMASTER
He may not be back at all. The governor
called him.
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EXT. STREET - DAY
Joshua comes out of the office and, after looking around, rides out of town.
EXT. FARM - DAY
Farm outside Burton. A team of horses is plowing up the ground and members of FARMER's
family are seeding it.
EXT. FARM - DAY
George gets off his horse and leads it up to the plow.
JOSHUA
Farmer pauses in his work.
FARMER
JOSHUA
Could ya'll use another hand?
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Farmer studies Joshua a bit.
FARMER
We could. You ever follered a plow?
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JOSHUA
In Georgia. We been farmin' it since
my pa died.
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FARMER
Alright. We can try you. How would
fifty cents a day and found be? You
could sleep in the dog run.
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JOSHUA
That would be fine. Thank you, sir.
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FARMER
Why don't you see to your horse and
then rustle back out here?
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JOSHUA
EXT. FARM - DAY
Joshua works with the farmer through the day.
EXT. FARM - EVENING
Joshua and the farmer head in for supper.
EXT. FARMHOUSE - EVENING
The farmer's WIFE is cooking in the kitchen which is on one side of the dog run.
The rest of the little house is on the other.
EXT. FARMHOUSE - EVENING
Continuous. The WIFE hands him a plate of beans and such.
WIFE
JOSHUA
WIFE
You come all the way from Georgia
to farm with us.
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JOSHUA
No, ma'am. I mean, I'm grateful, ma'am.
But I came to follow Captain.
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WIFE
JOSHUA
My father's Captain, ma'am. Captain
Lee McNelly. My father rode with him
in the war.
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WIFE
So you won't be stayin' with us long?
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JOSHUA
Long as I can, ma'am. Till the Captain
comes back from Austin.
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WIFE
You go over with my husband and kids--
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She gestures to where they are eating out in the cool of the evening.
WIFE (CONT'D)
--and I'll be along to say grace.
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JOSHUA
EXT. FARMHOUSE - EVENING
Family eating dinner at a wooden table. The kids are being seen and not heard.
WIFE
What is it you hope to do with Captain
McNelly, Joshua?
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FARMER
That's his business, dear.
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JOSHUA
I don't mind, sir. Ma'am. I guess
I don't rightly know. He was my father's
captain and if he's still an officer
I'm hopin' he'll take me on.
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FARMER
I don't believe the captain is in
the army these days, son.
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WIFE
But he's still an officer. After the
war he was with the State Police.
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FARMER
And the only decent man in it if you
ask me?
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JOSHUA
FARMER
The State Police was put on us, son.
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WIFE
Part of our punishment during the
reconstruction.
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FARMER
Redestruction, it was. We lost the
war. Then they freed the slaves, gave
them guns, and made them policemen.
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JOSHUA
They did that to us in Georgia, too.
All the judges were from the Union.
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FARMER
The wife nods at the staring children.
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WIFE
FARMER
The damn Union. We lived ten years
with no justice. A lot of men joined
the Ku Klux Klan to fight back.
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WIFE
But that just got a lot of innocent
people punished.
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FARMER
It seemed there was only one part
of Texas where justice for Texans
meant anything - and that was where
Captain McNelly was in charge of the
State Police.
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EXT. DOG RUN - NIGHT
Joshua beds down between the two rooms and looks out and up at the stars.
MONTAGE: FARM - DAY
A sequence to indicate passage of some days. Joshua continues to work the farm.
EXT. DOG RUN - NIGHT
Joshua beds down between the two rooms. Farmer enters.
FARMER
JOSHUA
FARMER
I hate to lose you, son, but you may
be done here.
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JOSHUA
Is it something I've done?
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FARMER
Oh, no. Not a thing wrong. But I was
in town today and heard a piece of
news.
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Joshua waits to hear.
FARMER (CONT'D)
The captain is back from Austin. I
hear he's lookin' for help.
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EXT. STREET - DAY
Burton. Some weeks later. Joshua rides into town.
EXT. POST OFFICE - DAY
Joshua dismounts and heads inside.
INT. POST OFFICE - DAY
Joshua, jingling coins in his pocket, walks into the post office. As he enters,
he holds the door for MCNELLY, who is leaving.
EXT. STREET - DAY
McNelly is in his early thirties. He is slight, about 135 pounds, with silky, wavy
hair worn a bit long and a neat, silky beard to his chest. He looks like what he
almost became - a preacher. McNelly mounts his horse.
INT. POST OFFICE - DAY
Continuous.
JOSHUA
POSTMASTER
JOSHUA
I heard Captain McNelly is back and
wanted to ask you where I could find
him.
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POSTMASTER
Look right out that window, son. There
he is.
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McNelly turns his horse and rides up the street. Joshua watches him critically.
JOSHUA
That can't be him. Captain was guerrilla
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